First things first….
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Happy Mother’s Day!
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If you are a mom, I hope you have an absolutely wonderful day :-)
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Second…
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I’m hoping I can ask for your help with something today.
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Because after many many rounds of book cover designs for Return to Real…
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I’m officially down to the final four cover variations…
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And I really need YOU to help me choose the FINAL COVER for the book.
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(More on how to do that in just a moment…)
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First, the story behind HOW this cover came to be is one filled with…
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Twists and turns…
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Embarrassing attempts…
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And a distinctive cover I had to kill…
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Here’s how it all unfolded…
1 | My First Cover (Please don't laugh...)
A few weeks ago, in [Issue #092], I introduced the work of Chip Kidd, arguably the most famous book cover designer alive…
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You may remember ALSO recall that Kidd has a framework he uses to evaluate every book cover that crosses his desk:
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The “Clarity + Mystery” Equation.
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Clarity means showing the viewer exactly what something is.
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Mystery means giving them just enough to make them curious.
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Too much clarity and you’ve got a textbook.
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Too much mystery and nobody knows what they’re looking at.
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The best covers have the perfect tension between both.
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This FIRST cover FAILS this test.
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Now, to be fair…
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My thinking behind this design direction was reasonable:
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This is a book titled Return to Real.
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So the cover has to be…. REAL.
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Not a stock photo. Not AI. So my instincts were to pull from images genuinely shot on the farm where the book was actually written. Like this one here:
That’s me. Walking down one of the trails on our farm. This is a REAL photograph. This is a REAL path. And I am a REAL human.
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(Check out my snazzy pants.)
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This photo checked every box I’d given myself.
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I shared the cover design with a trusted friend who has extensive book experience.
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His response:
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“Bro… this looks like a Christian lit journal.”
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Ugh. He was right.
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It was a beautiful photograph that promised the wrong book entirely.
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Anyone picking it up would expect a devotional.
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And every other farm photo I tried had the same vibe…
A reader looking for the book I actually wrote…
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(A deeply researched argument about market dynamics, the great AI dilemma, and human provenance in the post-AI economy…)
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…Would walk right past it.
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Which takes us to the FIRST lesson I learned in this whole process:
Lesson #1: You might be the worst possible judge of your own book cover.
Here’s why:
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As the author of your book, YOU already know what’s inside your book.
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But everyone else only knows what the COVER is telling them.
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In other words…
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You know TOO MUCH.
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That’s when I realized that I couldn’t do this on my own.
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I needed to bring in a professional…
2 | Hiring The Master.
For round two, I hired one of the most well-known and well-respected book cover designers working in the industry today.
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The kind of designer with dozens of best sellers to their name.
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The ten-page design brief I provided was detailed and specific.
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Here’s an excerpt:
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“Please make this distinct from Ask and Choose. This isn’t part of that series. This is a deeper, more nuanced book. A big-idea book, deeply researched, written at a different register. The cover needs to telegraph that.”
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Little did I know, this was about to send me down a rabbit hole…
3 | The Design Rounds.
What followed was one of the most intense, rollercoaster creative collaborations I’ve ever been part of…
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Here’s how it went.
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Step 1: I provided the competitive landscape.
Step 2: I provided a reference set to model.
Step 3: First round came back.
None of the designs followed the brief. :-/
They might’ve worked for a cookbook. Or a book about elementary school. Or a book about painting. But they didn’t work for the book that I wrote.
So I responded with even more detailed direction.
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Step 4: Second round came back.
The next round?
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Missed the mark even further.
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Each cover was reminiscent of a vintage nature paperback. Or a midcentury naturalist memoir.
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This design round didn’t signal the type of in-the-moment thought leadership I was trying to express. Nor did it convey the actual genre of the book.
I felt deflated.
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I felt stuck.
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My instincts were to micro-manage the designer even more than I already was.
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“What if we tried this typeface? What about that color?”
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But before hitting send on my next round of feedback, I stopped and asked myself a question:
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Maybe I’m the problem here??
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Why am I trying to do the thing I just hired the best person in the world to do?
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So I made a deliberate decision.
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I stepped back. Surrendered creative control. And told the designer:
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I think I might be the problem. Do what you do. I will get out of your way.
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Out of that surrender, a distinctive idea emerged…
Lesson #2: People don’t know what they want. But they DO know what they don’t want.
This is a core ASK Method principle.
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It’s true for customers in surveys. It’s true for readers buying books. And as it turns out, it’s true for authors evaluating their own book covers too.
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I couldn’t have told the designer what I wanted. Not coherently. Not in advance. Not in a brief.
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But every time the designer showed me something? I could tell them with absolute precision what was wrong.
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That’s the messy, non-linear, frustrating, beautiful shape of a real creative process.
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And it’s how we ended up with this next design…
4 | The Beautiful Wrong Cover.
I want you to sit with this cover for a moment.
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The red signs. The weathered wood. The white-painted lettering. The arrows pointing… somewhere.
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The first time I saw it, I thought, “Okay. This could be it.”
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It’s bold. It’s distinctive. It stands out on a shelf. It has a real point of view. It would never be confused with another book on the table at Barnes & Noble.
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I showed it to a few people whose taste I trust unconditionally.
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The reaction was strangely consistent.
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“This is a really distinctive cover… But is it really the right cover for the book you actually wrote?”
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Each one had a slightly different way of saying it. But they were all basically saying the same thing.
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And they were right.
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A reader who would love what’s inside Return to Real wouldn’t pick up a book with this cover. The signs felt rural-Americana. Rustic roadside-attraction.
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And maybe worse: a reader who would pick it up this book based on this cover would feel misled by what’s actually inside…
Lesson #3: A beautiful cover that promises the wrong book is worse than an ugly cover that promises the right one.
This cover represented excellent design. The craft was master-level. The kind of work most authors would have been thrilled to put their name on.
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Which is why killing this cover was probably the hardest single decision of the whole project.
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It’s also what brought me to a design direction I’d had imagined back on day one.
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One that up until that point, I had completely suppressed…
5 | The Instinct I'd Resisted.
When I first embarked on the project of writing this book, and when I imagined what the cover of this book might look like, I had a definite vision in my mind…
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It was visually closer to Ask and Choose.
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But with an elevated design treatment that signaled this was a VERY different kind of book, with higher aspirations.
However, I had suppressed that instinct.
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I feared the cover design would be “too close” to my previous books, and that readers would think it was a continuation of that series…
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In fact, I made the first point in my design brief clear:
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“Make this distinct from Ask and Choose.”
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I had decided that “distinct” meant “throw out the visual lineage.” Different fonts. Different palette.
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Different everything.
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But after the red signs got rejected by the people I trust most, I finally sat with the question I should have asked myself weeks earlier:
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What if my initial instinct was right and my rationalization was wrong?
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Here’s what I realized.
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The cover doesn’t need to look DIFFERENT from Ask and Choose. It needs to look like the book I actually WROTE.
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And the book I actually wrote is a completely different animal from those first two.
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Ask had a handful of references. Return to Real has over 150. The writing is more researched. More nuanced. More mature. In places it reaches for something lyrical. A quality my first two books didn’t come close to even touching.
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The cover needed to telegraph all of that.
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It needed to look like what it actually is.
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A cover can sit comfortably alongside Ask and Choose on a shelf and still signal that the work inside is something more.
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The differentiation lives in the cover art, the typography, the subtitle treatment. Not in throwing out the visual DNA entirely.
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In fact, abandoning the visual lineage entirely is what landed me with:
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A Christian lit devotional in Round 1.
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A 1960s paperback nature novel in Round 2.
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And a rustic roadside-Americana riddle in Round 3.
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When I went back to my instinct, the answer arrived almost immediately.
Lesson #4: Your first instinct is often right. Trust it.
By the way, there’s a strange poetry in this…
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This is, after all, a book about returning to what’s real.
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The cover process itself ended with me returning to the instinct I’d dismissed.
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The initial design direction I had envisioned when I first embarked on the project of writing this book.
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Which brings us to….
6 | The Final Design.
It was the instinct I’d had since nearly day one.
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Simple design. Classic typography.
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A cover centered around a single object.
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In this case…
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An object I’ve been carrying with me, literally, since the moment I wrote about it in the book itself.
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Something deeply personal.
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Something important enough to this book that, nearly a year ago… I thought… maybe THIS is what should be on the cover?
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Yet, I’d talked myself out of trusting that for almost a year.
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But now my thinking was clear.
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So I rolled up my sleeves and got to work.
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I created dozens of iterations.
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Worked on composition. Background. Typography. Color.
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I could feel it getting closer.
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When I had something I was finally proud of, I brought in a world class designer to refine it.
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Together, we landed on nine polished variations of the same core idea.
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Simplicity on the far side of complexity.
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We then narrowed those nine down to four finalists.
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Four covers I genuinely love.
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All of them.
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And this is where I need your help.
7 | The Ask. (This Is Where I Need YOU)
Here’s the favor.
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I have 4 final cover variations.
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I love all four. And that’s the problem.
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I need fresh eyes.
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And I’d like to ask YOU for help.
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I’ve posted the four cover variants here on Facebook:
And I would love to know which one is YOUR favorite??
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You can click to that post to see the un-blurred covers.
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In that post, to vote for your favorite, all you need to do is leave a comment with two things:
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Your favorite cover variant (A, B, C, or D).
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And (optional), any element combinations you’d love to see. (e.g. “I like the subtitle from B with the author block from D.” That kind of thing.)
Even if you only have 30 seconds, an A/B/C/D in the comments would mean the absolute WORLD to me.
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AND by clicking on that link above, you’ll get to see the final cover design :-)
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Before we wrap…
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One week from today is [Issue #100] of The Digital Contrarian.
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That’s the issue where “Behind the Scenes of a Book Launch” officially begins.
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I thought it was only appropriate to line things up with a milestone issue like #100.
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So starting next week…
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I’ll be taking you behind the scenes of everything I’m doing with this book launch… Everything I’m experimenting with. Everything I’m learning along the way. Lessons learned and mistakes made.
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Whatever book cover wins the vote…
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Is the cover that will posted everywhere.
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I would LOVE that decision to have your fingerprints on it.
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Here’s the link to cast your vote one last time:
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Okay, I’ll leave you with that for now…
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Have a GREAT rest of your weekend.
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Remember to hug the ones you love (especially the moms in your life…)
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And until next week,
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Ryan :-)